Charlotte

This is my naritive writing I did at school!

 * The Lost Little Girl **
 * Long, long ago the brave yellow knight set off to go and find the young girl trapped high up in the black tower. No one else dared to go and find her because there was a saying that it was full of monsters and dragons, but the brave knight decided to go on anyway. **


 * So the knight went through the deadly woods. It was gloomy and dim. Every single tree was totally bare with not even one leaf on a tree! The sky around them was turning grey and the clouds were black which made his coffee brown horse start to run. **


 * When he got to the tower it looked exactly the same as the deadly woods except a tall skinny tower was stuck right in the middle. The knight opened the door of the castle and…… **


 * “Ahhhh!” Yelled the knight. Right in front of him was a spider. Not just any spider, in fact it was the biggest spider the knight had ever seen! It was about the size of your dinner plate! **


 * Suddenly the gigantic spider sprayed this purple liquid into the knight’s eyes! He got such a shock that he fainted! **


 * When he woke up he felt that something was strange. When he got up he suddenly noticed he was invisible! So he crept past all of the spooky thinks like the monsters and the dragons, but suddenly he came to a hault… **


 * Right in front of him was a large wooden door with a large padlock on it. He thought to himself ,“how can I get through the door if there is a huge padlock on it!” Then he had an idea! **

** By Charlotte **
 * At the very bottom of the door was a crack, a crack slightly bigger than the others. “If I could use my sword to cut the crack to make it bigger I could fit through! So he cut the crack with his sword and finally he was finished. As he was crawling through he was changing back to normal and then he was through! “Who are you?” yelled the girl. “I am the yellow knight here to save you” Said the knight. So they both jumped out of the tower window onto the horse and it ran far, far away! **
 * They ended up in a magical world full of nature’s wonders and standing right in it was the beautiful coffee brown horse. The sun beamed through the tree tops like the opening of heaven and at last they were at the yellow castle!! **

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